Sunday, September 14, 2014

First Draft- Introduction (September the 15th)

   Google, Bing, and Naver are all major search engines that can get someone around the world-through a computer screen. Often, they prove to be convenient when researching. The only glitch is that they don't just get someone to the website of the biology research center they need for their paper. They give you the address as well, along with the phone number and sometimes, the personnel's full names, photos and e-mails too. Now suppose that you work at this research center. Recently, you posted a comment on an online article about the increasing number of immigrants under your name. One day, you receive a disturbing e-mail from an unknown number abusively criticizing your views. Where could the sender have found your personal information? You are very sensitive about personal information online. You decide to Google your name, and there it is: your name, your photo and e-mail, available for anyone willing to type your name. For years, the beauty of the internet and in this case, the beauty of online articles, was none other than anonymous comments. However, more and more online news websites are abandoning the system. They are not seeing that anonymous comments are more of an advantage to have in the internet society than un-anonymity. It shouldn't be going anywhere, for whatever reason.







I don't really like it..but it is my first draft sooooooo

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